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Where are you from? Nvm,I’m not even gonna play. this is that white boy rap ish.

Why does it sound like you are crumpling a chip bag at parts, ex. @1:48 and 1:50. Little noises stick out to me....like your breathing.Not sure if you are overweight or too close to the microphone but I can hear you breathe out your nose. It sounds like you suffer from sinusitis or maybe you have a big mustache.

Are you hear for feed back or to see if you can be clocked? Imo, you are very white.
 

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Where are you from? Nvm,I’m not even gonna play. this is that white boy rap ish.

Why does it sound like you are crumpling a chip bag at parts, ex. @1:48 and 1:50. Little noises stick out to me....like your breathing.Not sure if you are overweight or too close to the microphone but I can hear you breathe out your nose. It sounds like you suffer from sinusitis or maybe you have a big mustache.

Are you hear for feed back or to see if you can be clocked? Imo, you are very white.
I'm not white, I'm black, I'm from a wealthy family that lived in a white area in Los Angeles. lol. It took you longer to write that reply than it took for me to make that song in 4 minutes. Relax. Why so serious?
 

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Where are you from? Nvm,I’m not even gonna play. this is that white boy rap ish.

Why does it sound like you are crumpling a chip bag at parts, ex. @1:48 and 1:50. Little noises stick out to me....like your breathing.Not sure if you are overweight or too close to the microphone but I can hear you breathe out your nose. It sounds like you suffer from sinusitis or maybe you have a big mustache.

Are you hear for feed back or to see if you can be clocked? Imo, you are very white.
You from section 8 or the projects?
 

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And since your here ... I have something to ask you ... Why do white people always make it their business to come to black spaces????!
 

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And you been white the whole time so my question remains ...
accursing me of being white in no way offends me. i love the sound of my voice. it sounds like angels whispering maya angelou poems.

my question remains, you from the projects?
 

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accursing me of being white in no way offends me. i love the sound of my voice. it sounds like angels whispering maya angelou poems.

my question remains, you from the projects?

You people can be so pathetic

ignore list you go
 

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I'm not white, I'm black, I'm from a wealthy family that lived in a white area in Los Angeles. lol. It took you longer to write that reply than it took for me to make that song in 4 minutes. Relax. Why so serious?

I can tell. How are you going to make it if you can’t take criticism?everything I said was valid, make those changes and it would sound way better.
I thought you wanted input.

Don’t fake the funk of your background, be proud of who you are regardless of race. Just judging on production,you aren’t from a wealthy background...not even sure why you mentioned it.
 

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I can tell. How are you going to make it if you can’t take criticism?everything I said was valid, make those changes and it would sound way better.
I thought you wanted input.

Don’t fake the funk of your background, be proud of who you are regardless of race. Just judging on production,you aren’t from a wealthy background...not even sure why you mentioned it.
I have two degrees precious and a six figure job, this is a hobby, like posting your problems on LSA is your hobby.
Time to get off my dick now sweetie
 

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you section 8 people are so judgmental
I'm not white, I'm black, I'm from a wealthy family that lived in a white area in Los Angeles. lol. It took you longer to write that reply than it took for me to make that song in 4 minutes. Relax. Why so serious?

You from section 8 or the projects?

I been here since 2014 dumb *****. 4 years before you

accursing me of being white in no way offends me. i love the sound of my voice. it sounds like angels whispering maya angelou poems.

my question remains, you from the projects?
lol, the fact that you think you sound “proper,” is entertaining. You sound more ******* than anything with money to be honest.
You might live in Cali but I’d guess the clear lake or ukiah area...going by your voice...maybe even Fresno or Stockton.

Ya’ll come in here to to learn and duplicate...you are failing.

Then you go with a weak section 8/project line,lol.

What fell out your mama’s twat first?her daddy’s dick or you?
-see that joke has a zing and truth to it. your attempt fell flat like your granny’s ass.

take your ******* sh!t over to glp, where you belong.
 

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I have two degrees precious and a six figure job, this is a hobby, like posting your problems on LSA is your hobby.
Time to get off my dick now sweetie
Sure you do. Most people put $$$ into their hobby. Turning one of the 12 bedrooms in your faux mansion into a little studio doesn’t cost much. Using better software should be a nickel in the bucket to you.

why so serious? I mean, you are the one that came to appropriate. Don’t be made that you’ve been here since 2014 and still getting clocked.

Be honest with yourself, hun.
 

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Sure you do. Most people put $$$ into their hobby. Turning one of the 12 bedrooms in your faux mansion into a little studio doesn’t cost much. Using better software should be a nickel in the bucket to you.

why so serious? I mean, you are the one that came to appropriate. Don’t be made that you’ve been here since 2014 and still getting clocked.

Be honest with yourself, hun.
I wrote this song for you. Have a listen



Would love to chat, but I'm tryna crank out 4 songs before 7
 

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I'm wondering when you are going to realize that this isn't the place for your music. You can't take criticism at all and then try to make personal attacks based on assumption. i guess that's why you are wasting your time on here...no one else is taking this seriously with that attitude.

Don't bother quoting me, i've already had a back and forth with you before and it's pointless.
 

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I'm wondering when you are going to realize that this isn't the place for your music. You can't take criticism at all and then try to make personal attacks based on assumption. i guess that's why you are wasting your time on here...no one else is taking this seriously with that attitude.

Don't bother quoting me, i've already had a back and forth with you before and it's pointless.
STFU
 

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this thread and song is an absolute mess. I am dying out here from laughter
 

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What fell out your mama’s twat first?her daddy’s dick or you?
-see that joke has a zing and truth to it. your attempt fell flat like your granny’s ass.

take your ******* sh!t over to glp, where you belong.

omg you ethered the OP lmao
 

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i mean i cant even get mad at that peralta re-issue deck tho. i wanted to rock it but it was too racy for me. lmao i was like dude I'm black i cant ride around on this viking ass sh!t

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i like the beat and soundscapes. lyrically, while i liked the content a lot cuz it was old school direct in ur face rap, i almost felt like it was just 6 bars which just repeated, so for me it turned into 6 bars with no hook in a way. still a good start tho imo

take a listen to this. grew up with these guys. its more lyrically based with very little hook to kinda cram more of a message into roughly 3 minutes worth of track

 

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I have two degrees precious and a six figure job, this is a hobby, like posting your problems on LSA is your hobby.
Time to get off my dick now sweetie
Do you spam those white websites with this? Why you come over here and do it? Because we Black?
 

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take a listen to this one too. dont be afraid of using some samples to make ur tracks fuller

 

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i like the beat and soundscapes. lyrically, while i liked the content a lot cuz it was old school direct in ur face rap, i almost felt like it was just 6 bars which just repeated, so for me it turned into 6 bars with no hook in a way. still a good start tho imo

take a listen to this. grew up with these guys. its more lyrically based with very little hook to kinda cram more of a message into roughly 3 minutes worth of track


This sh!t is fire. It's kind of a hardcore Treach delivery with a Chuck D / Ice Cube message. Dope 90s feel. Lyrics were definitely on point.
 

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take a listen to this one too. dont be afraid of using some samples to make ur tracks fuller


This sh!t dope. I gotta listen a few more times to get all the lines. Which is a good thing. I swear this flow sounds like the female mc Boss. Great breath control, automatic spitting
 

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take a listen to this one too. dont be afraid of using some samples to make ur tracks fuller


I don't produce. I'm thinking about tinkering though if I find a user friendly production interface
 

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i like the beat and soundscapes. lyrically, while i liked the content a lot cuz it was old school direct in ur face rap, i almost felt like it was just 6 bars which just repeated, so for me it turned into 6 bars with no hook in a way. still a good start tho imo

take a listen to this. grew up with these guys. its more lyrically based with very little hook to kinda cram more of a message into roughly 3 minutes worth of track


I literally turned the mic on, pressed record, and started talking. If I couldn't think of something I just repeated what I said in the previous. 100% freestyle, nothing written. Literally an 8 minute investment of time. Don't tell LSA though, they think I wrote something down and planned it out and rehearsed or something i leave my mistakes in. I'm surprised people don't know a freestyle when they hear it.
 

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I literally turned the mic on, pressed record, and started talking. If I couldn't think of something I just repeated what I said in the previous. 100% freestyle, nothing written. Literally an 8 minute investment of time. Don't tell LSA though, they think I wrote something down and planned it out and rehearsed or something i leave my mistakes in. I'm surprised people don't know a freestyle when they hear it.

oh okay its a freestyle i get it now. i mean it aint really gun in ur mouth talk but if ur calling it a freestyle then i guess go ahead @Lexonfiyah lol
 
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This sh!t dope. I gotta listen a few more times to get all the lines. Which is a good thing. I swear this flow sounds like the female mc Boss. Great breath control, automatic spitting

yeah its way ahead of its time. came out in 93 and we were all fans of Boss so its possible some of her influenced it but id have to ask Marcus to make sure, but yeah Boss is one of the baddest mc's of all time imo

 

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