i will read it and let you know!Can I get some feedback on a short story that I did?
Thanks.
Alright,style first.There's a little error on page 4 : "I was avoiding Eric like the plague so decided to take our dog out for a walk. " and on page 1,you used the word "question" in two following sentences...maybe change it with a synonym or just cross the second "question".Apart from that it is honestly very easy to read.Thanks so much.
Thanks for the feedback. Do you think the story is Boring?Alright,style first.There's a little error on page 4 : "I was avoiding Eric like the plague so decided to take our dog out for a walk. " and on page 1,you used the word "question" in two following sentences...maybe change it with a synonym or just cross the second "question".Apart from that it is honestly very easy to read.
Now the story content...,well ,I really enjoyed it. I want to know what happens next.
not at all ! The protagonist was flawed but relatable. It is honestly very good .I want to know what happens next, and i was disappointed that it was so short lol. Please continue writing!!Thanks for the feedback. Do you think the story is Boring?